Music Video Class Feedback

Performance/lip-syncing- overall not a great performance, lack emotion towards the song.
Relationships between music and visuals- Most people said it worked very well, lyrics relevant to storyline.
Camera Work- Lack the variety of piano shots, but other narrative shots was good, but just mainly too repetitive.
Editing- Shots could be cut quicker, needed bit more transitions/fades.
Special Effects- No actually special effect used but good use of the lighting.
Mise-en-Scene/Costumes/Locations/Props- Very good use of the empty hall also the car which is used appropriate, But needed to use more costumes.