Final Cut Screen Grab

Teacher Feedback

Basically our feedback was that the video was quite good, but if we had 'dressed' it up more, for example wearing suits and such, and to sort out the mise-en-scene in general to fit with the genre conventions.

Music Video Class Feedback

Performance/lip-syncing- overall not a great performance, lack emotion towards the song.
Relationships between music and visuals- Most people said it worked very well, lyrics relevant to storyline.
Camera Work- Lack the variety of piano shots, but other narrative shots was good, but just mainly too repetitive.
Editing- Shots could be cut quicker, needed bit more transitions/fades.
Special Effects- No actually special effect used but good use of the lighting.
Mise-en-Scene/Costumes/Locations/Props- Very good use of the empty hall also the car which is used appropriate, But needed to use more costumes.